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Re: Character dialogue
*Marc* hey, hey, you can't try to save my life yet! It would ruin the story. And FYI, I'm a girl. Marc is short for Marcella. Don't worry, I'll survive. ...
Aug 12, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
definitely a memoir. like Sarah Plain and Tall or something. Deathbed
Aug 12, 2007 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
its very good, it made me curious. but the last sentence was a bit of a run-on. I was fifteen again, and Dad and I were bouncing along the back ...
Aug 12, 2007 -
Re: something i wrote to vent
wow, thank you guys so much! you have no idea how encouraging that is.
Aug 12, 2007 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
see, the problem is, most of these are so random that i probably WOULD read the rest of the least for a chapter or so.
Aug 2, 2007 -
Re: Character dialogue
*Marc points upward at Aimee* i like her. she understands what we go through. *Kylee smacks Marc* oh come on. our writer's not insane. Marc - Ha! You're not DYING ...
Aug 2, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
a prodigal son type story. about a girl or a guy who screws up his life and then finds that some girl or guy from their childhood was the one ...
Aug 2, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
a girl who doesn't fit in in a preppy rich snob school. "The Burning"
Jul 28, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"My surfboard? Uh...I'd buy a new one." ~Marc "My life would be over." ~Kylee "I don't have possessions." ~Dax What are you passionate about?
Jun 26, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"Mine." ~Marc "Mine." ~Dax "Um...can't we share?" ~Ky What is your opinion on the universe at large?
Jun 25, 2007 -
Re: something i wrote to vent
ok, thanks. i'm pretty sure its spelled correctly, but i will check. sorry i made you all defensive lol.
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: Character dialogue
"Sure. Thanks...uh...monkey boy..." ~Dax
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"Dr. Pepper." ~Marc "Ginger ale." ~Kylee "Stupid question." ~Dax Does age go hand in hand with wisdom?
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: Character dialogue
*Kylee grins* "Thank you for the peach." *Dax glances at Tamia* *Dips finger in the dip on her face and puts it in his mouth* Kylee: "Ewww." Dax: "Sorry. I'm ...
Jun 20, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"Uhh...I guess...muscles. A nice tan. Yeah. Pretty much the rest depends on whether or not he can tolerate me." ~Marc "A big smile, kinda longish hair, not like military crew-cuts ...
Jun 20, 2007
