Samar

I try to make you understand My pain, the ache throbbing inside I try to say it out loud You shun me and go to sleep I scream and scream ...

The sound of your laughter Fills my soul with light Changing earth to heaven An Angel entered my life The dancing shadows of your dreams Twinkle brightly in your eyes ...

umm i found this quite good but i would like to point out a few mistakes.... it would be better if u wrote so much pain instead of some much ...

Hmmm on the contrary... i love the poem....and i truly understand the feelings portrayed in the poem! Good Job!!!

umm i am really sorry but this is quite a weird poem..... !!!

Sitting alone here in the dark Drenched in pain I think of life Its all a game Of win and lose Of breaking through Its all fake Just a game ...

Take an axe And cut me deep Cut me cut me Till I scream Give me pain Make me cry Test my patience Till I die Hit me hard Give ...