SamWeeks

*thanks*

Thnks for the advice! :D

This is the first poem I have wriiten in a long while (And the first I am really happy with) so please leave feed back *Contains one use of strong ...

This is very good. Some great imagery and feeling throughout, it's all excellent but I think my favourite stanza is the final one, it wraps up the poem; giving a ...

I really liked it, I think it sounds cheerful in a weird kind of a way, like you're 'telling the world to go to hell' (only in a way that ...

Firstly thank you very much for the advice on punctuation with Steve's dialouge, it's really helpful. I purposely missed puncutated Ezekiel's dialouge, (No spaces etc.) because I wanted him to ...

Release Date: Out now Consoles: PC, XBOX 360, Playstation 3 ( released on 21 January 2011) Age Rating: 15 (UK) Mass Effect was one of the most critically acclaimed games ...

All that can be said about italicizing has already been said to I'll get right to it: I really like this as an introduction into your world. One of the ...

Well I'm going against the flow and saying that I didn't like it. Firstly I'm not sure about the voice of the poem, knowing you personally I don't think it ...

oh and I for got to put a full stop at the end of 'he stated' :P

I'll get what I believe to be a typo out of the way first: the blue flames lapsed violently at me. I think you mean lapped, unless the flames were ...

Thanks for the advice Ben and good luck with 'Jack returns to France" ;)

don't worry, I will be posting more and thanks for the typo flag

Learning Curve Part 1 By Sam Weeks Ezekiel made his move. The ivory piece floated through the air for a few moments, kept upright by his gravity manipulator before coming ...