Sageleaf

Wow Jessa, this is amazing. I feel like I just lost a friend too. I don't agree with those of you who want less questions. I understand that questions are ...

This was an assignment. -------------------------------------------------- Wet Small Falling to earth Like tiny tears from God Sometimes Warm Sunny Still moist Like a little cloud Just for you Sometim

Spring flowers blossom beautiful Their pink and purple heads pushing up through the cool ground The earth is becoming soft again Warm Summer grows up the plants makes them stronger ...

Hi Snowberry! This is a really interesting topic. It's love, hurt and acceptance all rolled into one, which is unique because most writers choose just one of those topics. I ...

In reply to Nova and Snowberry23. I have never been happy with the rhyme of "gems" and "them". I have thought long and hard about that one, but I can't ...

Hi Priyansha! Let me first say, this poem is beautiful. It is strong, serious, and so sincere. I can tell that, if you could, you would read this to everyone ...

Hi Molly! All I can say is, wow! I love your poem! It is sad and a little haunting, but not hopeless. You did a good job of telling the ...

Wow, I am impressed! You are a very good writer! This poem is very deep, and with a very nice flow. The only problem that I could see was your ...

Hey Gracie! I love this poem! I like the topic, as I feel the some way sometimes, and I like how you write. There are some errors, so anything I ...

Hi! I like your style, it tells a story in a very simple way. Really I only have one thing to point out. Is it? Discriminate. Ignore. Forget. "Is it?" ...

Hi! The first thing that stands out to me about this poem is the italics . You are using the italics for emphasize, but it really isn't necessary, and draws ...

Wow, I love how you portray your anger. You seem to realize that anger is a very complex emotion. You also have relatively equal and balanced lines, which is good. ...

First, animekaratepup, is your review for the right poem? It seems like it isn't. Now, sgppoetry, this is an interesting poem. I am guessing you wrote this to convey the ...

Hey Amelia! I really like this poem, how you actually paint a picture in my head. This is a good example of descriptive poetry. I think a lot of poetic ...

Hi! I'm curious, what was your insperation for this poem? It's very unique in many ways; the topic, the way you tell the story, and the story itself. I'm with ...