Sageleaf

Hey misstoria, I would love some reviews! (These are both poems) Thanks! Do you have anything you would like me to review for you? Sage

Congratulations on an awesome poem! You convey your story in such a simple yet bitter-sweet way. What I love about horses is their unconditional love, and how they will steal ...

Wow! If you write this idea into a book, I would definitely read it! Very interesting plot idea so far! I don't see any grammatical errors that weren't already addressed. ...

First off, don't put yourself down! My writing teacher used to yell at me every week for saying I was bad at something. Everyone has different writing abilities, but when ...

Hi! This is a very nice poem! I have never been skiing/snowboarding, but this takes me there and makes me feel it. As for corrections, I don't see anything that ...

Wow Eli, this is powerful! It makes you think about those stories in a different way, more in depth. I have to disagree with Kamas, though; I like how you ...

Wow, this is really nice! You did a great job! Sage

Aww this is so awesome! I wish more guys realised the things you say here. It sounds as if you wrote this as a song. If that is the case, ...

Hi Kaywiia! I love this idea! It's so encouraging, and I'm sure your friend will love these. My favorites are "Building a Future" and "My Goodbye". I guess the only ...

Hi Rose14 and welcome to YWS! First off, let me say this; I don't mean any offense with my review. I am just trying to help you become a better ...

I agree with RobsterJames, this would make a great song! Some people think there isn't a difference between lyrics and poetry, but there is. In order to be great (instead ...

Hi! So, you said you want it like Dr. Suess, so I'm guessing your going for a childish type feel? Also, how flexible is the narration? I mean, could you ...

First, I wrote this poem as a sort of charge/challenge to anyone who reads it. It was completly inspired by my passion for helping others, and only took about an ...

I noticed something about this poem before, put I didn't know quite what until now. This isn't a poem, it's a song! It would make an awesome song! Do you ...

Hi! Your poem does make sense, the meaning is just a little bit elusive for me. I know it's about two lovers, but I don't know if one died or ...