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Re: Counting Days
This is based mostly on an actual dream i had, which had a plot line but didn't really make sense. the subconscious and dreaming mind does not follow the laws ...
Feb 10, 2005 -
Re: Counting Days
Counting Days She’s walking away Down the street, No cars go by, How early is the morning? There are doves behind her, Disguised in grey, When she turns to look ...
Feb 9, 2005 -
Re: Lirn
Meshalidar, thanks for the the typo tips. i have trouble catching them all myself. as for semi-colens, I don't really understand when it's best to use them so i don't ...
Feb 6, 2005 -
Re: Lirn
Part one of a fantasy story that still need a real name. any suggestions. i know everything that happens in this story, there's just the matter of sorting it out. ...
Feb 5, 2005 -
Re: To My Muse
To My Darling Muse Flame, my tormentor, stalker, taunter, You are just out of reach, Stretched and jeering face, I see you in the shadows, I see you in my ...
Feb 3, 2005 -
Re: Road Trip
Road Trip Road out before me, Hand out the window, Sitting beside you, I’m not the driver, Thoughts on other things, Not this long stretch of flattened land. Just came ...
Jan 27, 2005 -
Re: 100% marshmellow fluff--with a bit of flare
very beautiful. tranquil. I enjoyed your use of the language.there's something oblique and undefined about it, which is god and bad, depeding on your perspective. it's enjoyable but doesn't creat ...
Jan 24, 2005 -
Re: Attire
beautiful. Confusing but beautiful. pleasingly dark and olbique. were they drabbles? here's what i can't decide, is the main cahracter talking to a friend, a parent, or to herself?
Jan 23, 2005 -
Re: Three People and Falling Stars
I guess i don't completely understand how to decide where to stick my poetry. Maybe if i had a better explanation of the criteria? PLease?
Jan 22, 2005 -
Re: Three People and Falling Stars
where do i use the word ghetto? i don't think i do. I use the word 'grotto', which is a completely different thing.
Jan 22, 2005 -
Re: Republicans or Democrats? Conservative or Liberal?
I'm a democrat. i think of myself as having liberal values. but i have conservative views about things like clothing. i think popular fasion is far too revealing. I think ...
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: Suzhou
very beatifull poem. a paper cuttout illustration of grotesque suffering. the rhythm was. heartfelt imagry, with a tang of resentment and salted with regret. it is alluring and off-putting at ...
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: Three People and Falling Stars
Three People and Falling Stars She knelt down and poured words though her fingers like sand They spread out over the liquid ground that became the sky And they slid ...
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: Greetings and Salutations from the house Next to Sunnymuffin
what is S.P.E.W. ?
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: Greetings and Salutations from the house Next to Sunnymuffin
Sunnymuffin is the little old blue house that's on the property next to ours. it was owned by a woman who we politely call 'unique' and she hosted seminars for ...
Jan 21, 2005
