Sabine

I enjoyed this, I liked the sort of ambling pace. I made me think of Neil Gaiman's American Gods, the patter and feeling of the writing. the first paragraph drew ...

The dialogues were REALLY good, and I loved them. They showed us a lot about the characters, who they were, and what they did before coming into their current situations. ...

thank you :). I like that part too.

this has a sort of echoing quality, it creates a strong images. A stage as a stage and a stage as a metephor. A lot of what poetry (to me) ...

~please pay attention to the timestamps~ I. Present- Ghasakis III, Traveel City, Hyatt2 Hotel - 06:44 local time Dawn suffused the sky – slowly, creepingly – until all at once ...

thank you both so very much! as for the catagory, perhaps it does belong in 'dramatic' - I just took a wild guess at where to place it.

thanks! It's a really popular style over in the fan fiction realms... called drabbles. I'm no August, Luna or Delightfully Eccentric, but I love the style. The numbers are word ...

Soon the Departure to Avalon This, the very substance of this, Of the magnitude of what they will tear apart And pull down Or draw together For the sake of ...

A lot of fantasy and classics fans out there. Nice:-D. I like some things in those genres too, especially beauty and the beast retellings. like Rose Daughter by Robin McKinley ...

Thanks for all the nice reveiws, guys. I'm glad you liked it. Sorry I didn't respond sooner, I got caught up in... stuff... and practically forgot this place even existed ...

Present Tense -WIP Fandom: none/original Author's Notes: Has only been bata briefly read, and it's not even a first full chapter. x-posted at my. Summery: "...This is not where you ...

This is a technically very well done poem. Very smooth, goth-esque imagery. I got a little tripped up in the flow of the poem, like i couldn't quite connect with ...

spare and refined, quite thought provoking. I thought the rhythm was very effective. very nice writing.

neither, it's in character (sort of) so i's not my anything but rather a combo character's boyfriend/signifigant other type thing

Watching sunlight through glasses of water In a still room that smells of basil And sand I can feel you thinking from over here Such heavy thoughts I look out ...