Sabbat

Yes, one of the English teachers reviewing it felt that using a priest for the evil character was wrong. She was a very devout Christian and wasn't very understanding toward ...

Thank you. Once again, sorry for the mix up.

Thank you for the Critique :) I feel strongly about this story, as my fiance and I are both Bisexual and I am an Athiest, and she is a Wiccan, ...

I'm very sorry, I have made a mess of this. The story you read has been posted before. The story that is up now is the one I intended to ...

Do not be too discouraged. I've tried Fantasy so many times, and it is a very hard theme to work with.