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Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of my novel for me? Please and thank you.

Would you review the first chapter of my story for me? Please and thank you.

Aww, I really wanted a kitty :? Could you just read my short story then? Please and thank you.

Can you review my short story? Please and thank you.

Can you review my short story? Please and thank you.

"Patrick Hale Nelson." The interrogator threw the papers down on the table. I looked down at them and back at the man disgusted. They were of Patrick, of his bloodied ...

Granted, but it turns out the entire country was aliens that forced humans into secret underground fighting rings. I wish I had an endless supply of blue jello.

Wow! I absolutly love this, it actually sounds like something Erin Hunter would write. It really sound like the way Hollyleaf would act. My favorite part would have to be, ...

Will you review this for me? Please and thank you.

Could you review this for me? Please and thank you ^-^

Thanks for the reveiw. ^-^ I definatly agree on how there should be more space between the flashback, infact the document that its saved to my computer, there is, but ...

Unfortunatly, there was bugs inside the marshmallow, and everyone got worms.

"Smokekit, Tinykit, run and fetch Littlesong!" Her mothers panicked voice confused all the kits. Ten seconds ago, Owlkit was talking to Sorrowtail about the difference between a shrew and a ...

I love both of these pictures, but the moon one in particular, the angle is just great. Try and try I have to get a good picture of the moon, ...

O.O The picture is great, but that chicken really creeps me out. I actually thought it was a Photograph untill I looked at it a little closer. And I have ...