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This is an excellent work of art. The flow of your rhyme scheme was perfect, not one syllable seemed misplaced. Your writing definitely brought with it a sense of whimsy. ...

Well, this is definitely....dark. The actual flow of rhyming seems a bit off to me but that's probably due to my being used to the styles followed in music. The ...

Arc’s strokes grew more fluid and defined as he became further engrossed by his work. The massive brush in hand, the scent of fresh paint, the music of the Catalyst ...

Thank you, Medusa, for the input. I'll be fixing those errors when I have a bit more time on my hands, seeing as right now I have five minutes before ...

A symphony of voices lapped against the aged cotton of Bellin’s hood. He could hear them; their pain, their confusion, the cries of a people lost to the truth. Weathered ...

Thank you lethero for pointing out the grammatical errors. I have fixed them now and would be greatful for any opinions as to whether or not my story is compelling ...

I could be a serious dousche about the fact that you ignored my story and asked me a question I've had to answer about a million times Kyte, but I ...

Hey man, I feel like I owe you for reading my stories so I wanted to review one of your works. I like the story, kind of reminds me of ...

It seems like werewolf enthusiasts are really into your writing Enjeru. Well I, being somewhat bored with the whole werewolf thing, find your writing very interesting. I like Asriel's attitude ...

Your description is great, allowing a clear mental image. I'm not much of a wolf fan personally (I find them to be a little overdone, just like well done steak) ...

Well, this is it, my final revision of this story. Whether or not it is liked I'm going to continue it just because I want to actually finish a story ...

Yeah, sorry it took such a long time for me to revisit this story, I just had some things going on in real life that I had to deal with. ...

Well, this is my fourth and final attempt at getting this took a while to rewrite this because I warped my story a great deal. The beginning has been altered ...

Thanks everyone. Your posts have helped me to realize that this part of the prologue is very cliched so I plan to have a revised version, including the entire prologue ...

"Not far ahead of them, a man was leaning against the wall." What wall? The wall of the school I'm assuming but I'm not sure. "As he got closer, he ...