SIC

I don't really get it, but I still like how you put it. I like the words you used and how you used them. This isn't the greatest Poem i've ...

I love this! Its very funny and is very....unique I guess is the word I'm looking for. It was very nice and made good sense. Just like most poetry though, ...

From what you tell me it will turn out to be a very good story... But you REALLY need to fix your grammar. also Guy13 called me and told me ...

Its a good story, but very hard to read. With few paragraphs I don't feel like im reading a story rather a article. Try putting some paragraphs in there to ...

I suppose it could be longer. Not to sure what your trying to get across though. I liked the poem very much though. Very clever.

I guess this is dead so... This is spam, SIC. Please refrain from commenting on your own work unless you are responding to a critiquer or posting an update in ...

First of all, I'd just like to say: Wow! This is a great piece of writing! It was amazingly descriptive and visual. Not only that, but the philosophies you portray ...

This was extremely touching. I loved the idea and thought that it was good poem It ended great and it was a blast to read. I read it 3 times ...

The night comes back to me like it had just happened yesterday. I was laying on my bed, reading Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets. It was near the ...

A little short but I liek it still.

I guess this is dead so...

Still prety cool tho

Original format FTW

A little odd reading two sentences per space. You shouldnt space it out like this It seems more like a poem Rather than a story.

Kurimi sat next to the door he just left. He felt horrible. He had just intruded on someone making out with a girl. All because of the horrible thought that ...