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*Some of my posts are getting confusing with all the hussle So this is my new post* Kyle ran up to clari. "Hey Clari...." Kyle said... He was going to ...

Kyle- Kyle ran up to Sam. "Bored?" Kyle said. "Maybe we can have '30 minutes in heaven', what cha' think about that?" Kyle said looking flirty.

Kurimi- Kurimi looked at the pill. Kurimi swalloed it without any beverage. He started trippin.

Kyle looked at the balled up paper in his hand that Sam had thrown him. "Ahh i see." Kyle said. "Hmm thrown into a pool naked." Kyle said under his ...

Kyle~~~~~ Kyle ran up to Genna. "So uh, What exactly is going on here?" Kyle said. "What did I miss?"

I sat there on the edge of my bed Pondering to myself...I felt like I were dead. There I sat. Sat. Thinking of how it must be. Sitting there thinking. ...

You used apostrophes rather than quotation marks. You should fix that. Other than the quotes, It was fantastic. Very entertaining.

Im getting sick of Kurimi so Im gonna introduce... Name: Kyle Appearance: Gothic, flipped hair, about 5"6 tall and black hair. age: 16 Background: Laid back lover, loves to kiss. ...

"no" Kurimi said. "You don't understand." "All my life I've been alone...abused..." He said... For the first time in his life Kurimi shed a tear.

Kurimi loaded the gun and held the trigger. His time was nearing...

Kurimi- Kurimi was going to do it. No one wanted to stop him... It would all end in front of the building where a big party was going on. He ...

*Whos Kiromimi?* She stumbled into two people as she tryed to make it the end of the hallway. "Who are you?"she asked as she looked up at two people...*?* *Kurimi ...

Kurimi was getting bored, and lonely. He was very lonely his whole life, and even though he was surrounded by all these people, he was very lonely. Kurimi ran out ...

Kurimi ran up to nagame "What the hell is going on?"

This was a very deep and sorrowful story. It was so detailed and described well I can see it in my mind, completely clear. You let nothing out. Putting so ...