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Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
"Is that your brilliant attempt to make me jealous?" I said to him. " Your just using her now..." I said and walked out of the room.
May 17, 2008 -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
I looked at Brian. "Don't be jealouse because you weren't her knight in shining armor." I said to Brian who was looking sternly at me.
May 17, 2008 -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
I walked in the door. I yawned. "Finally awake huh?" I said sleepily. I knew brian was there I just didn't bother to look at him. "I slept in the ...
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Ice Cold Rain Drops on Failure
Nice poem. I love the rhyming. Keep up the good work for me okay? I thought this was really good. My favoriet from you so far. keep working!
May 16, 2008 -
Re: v vs w II
I stood where I was. "Control it? Most vampires can't STAND it. " I yelled.
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
I walked out of the bathroom. I figured that Chelsea was still talking to Brian so I walked outside for some air. I noticed Chelsea, passed out on the ground. ...
May 16, 2008 -
Re: v vs w II
Slowly I stood up. I walked forward with my head down. I turned to look at Lucinda. "I warned you to clean the blood off your shoe." I said calmly.
May 16, 2008 -
Re: My Eyes Decieve Me
Nice poem. I really liked it. You really need to work on it though, but overall it was great. ~SIC
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
(Jase) "Our band is called Intoxication... Our supporters are Mindless Self Indulgence." I said
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
(Jase) "Chelsea" I reassured her " Your voice is Beautiful. Plus its a metal band, do you think you need to have a good voice anyways" I laughed. "Just look ...
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
(Jase) I looked at Chelsea. "Maybe I should play here with my band." I said smiling. "By the way, we need a singer for our band, and your voice would ...
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Re: Thryn
I thought it was great! It could use some work though. Your efforts are delighting!!!!
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Vampires against..
I looked over at Grace. "Wait..." I said to her. "Shiro..." I said. "The bite...He..he will become one of us..." I said finally realisising my mistake. "DAMN!" I yelled loudly.
May 15, 2008 -
Re: v vs w II
I approached Tobi, splattered in Lucindas blood. What have I done? "I...I.." I tried to find the words I was looking for. "I'm a monster.." I said then dropped to ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: v vs w II
I got up and noticed Jess. She was lifeless. Nothing left in her. She was dead. I twitched. My knees fell on the ground. It was my fault. I picked ...
May 15, 2008
