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There’s Something Wrong With ME My process of doing homework. I'm already at home, I try to relax because I just ate my dinner on my bed as the T.V. ...

That was really good! Funny as always comrade, :). I think when Edward was trying to get his keys I got slightly confused. Either becaue I'm sleepy or maybe you ...

Hey, I really liked this post. I haven't read the others but it seemed well introduced. I would suggest watching out for mechanical[ I don't know what to call them ...

Chapter Five Meanwhile Jason was at home touching up some pictures for Fonda’s story. It didn’t take long for him to hear the urgent cry on Down and South. The ...

Part Three The rest of the weekend had been eventless, dull and nothing very interesting had happened. And Monday at school was much the same, unless one would count my ...

In the post it says part two continued...But thanks! And for anyone esle who didn't know, this is my fourth post of this story. And this is Part Two continued. ...

Thank you for feed back! :)

Part Two cont. In the store there were only a few people. Most of them in the children’s section, as some toddlers sat flipping throw books in their cute little ...

I'm so* happy you finally posted this! I've been waiting for this. And it's good really it is, a little on the short side. But with the things you talked ...

I think everyone esle gave you some worthy critizism! I think it was really good and you had some really great imagery. Question; Stanza One : Exactly what does wrath ...

Well not in here, but in Romantic Fiction I have some prose that goes unreviewed! I could review some of your work if you would like :) ;)!

And the smiles were a big help! :) I hope you'll like my edit. Thanks again!

Thank you! That was actually helpful and not painful!

That was very helpful, thank you! p.s.- I thought there was something choppy about it...

He is just to much to take in, I don't know if those good looks or if theres something more I just know my boyfriend can't stand him, And meanwhile ...