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Its okay I wrote it just today. :). p.s.- Its about a woman who loved a man until she found out he had another lover...its more nonfiction than fiction...I'll change ...

Such a small poem and yet you had so much to say. :). Thank you so much for the review. p.s.- I was also thinking this sucks as a poem ...

I know they are additve! I do believe I've read The Secret Language of Girls. It wasn't so bad :)! p.s.- Sadly I am slowly growing out of them...

Ok Meg Cabot...anyone know her? If not how about Stephenie Meyers? Or The Clique books, A-list, and maybe even Gossip Girl? And any other YA book mostly for teenage girls... ...

Bah. Harry Potter isn't YA, Claudette! And some YA books are done well. I hate the Catcher in the Rye. Holden is so whiny ... *stabs* I just don't understand ...

I liked it and my poem that i posted...inspired from Shakespeare!!! But no really, be orginal write from the heart, and find your tone for each poem if you didn't ...

There is no man! There is no MAN... And here I am, alone and in silent pain. My friends all cheery, Oh just let me be! Oh you see kind ...

Silly goose what is "FPIC"? And yes I'll see you in Mr.D's if you don't mean Mr.Deanbang and you mean Mr.D for english? You know what i need to PM ...

amber i loved it!!! but like the person before me said add more detail!! i found it very engaging and it was fun to read. it has a tone thats ...

OK I READ THIS YESTERDAY AND I COULDN'T SIGN ON TO REPLY!!! BUT I READ IT BEFORE , SO I AGREE WITH MOST OF THE ADVICE BUT I THINK IT ...

ITS YOOOUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE UUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JK LOL. THANKS AM, SEE U AT SCHOOL, AND I THINK YOUR RIGHT ONCE I KNOW WHAT THE HECK YOUR TALKING ABOUT, JK LOL. NO ...

Um...well the person before me, pretty much said it all. :). About the grammar i mean. And i really liked it and i can't wait to see more...;).

Thank you both for the reviews!!! Im a bit more for the romance so im exciting to add more action into this story. :). And fix those mistakes, lol.

Chapter Two The next day there was an object in the sky. Not a bird. Not a plane. And this time not even Superman. It was Super Boy. Superman had ...

I liked it. Just correct a few mistakes and maybe clear up of the confusing parts and its really good.;).