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Can someone please , please give me a review? ): It would be much appreciated, thank you in advance.

Soul Mates “Yep he brought me a ring yesterday.” I smiled at my friend, as she held out her hand and the fake ring shined against the sun. “Wow, so ...

I think it was mostly fine, you can help yourself more than I can. [ Cause I don't know much about grammar lol] Besides I think the suggestions you made ...

Thank you! Yeah, I didn't want to write this prompt. I had to force myself and the message pulled itself out. I'm glad that you liked it! [And I finally ...

Thanks for the review! And yeah I need tons more description in this, and really how didn't you know she was normal? I guess the whole then with her conscious ...

Drew It was late at night, some time past midnight. I was speeding down the road, for the first time I was impatient tonight. I was searching, seething, shouldn’t I ...

I would like to know if this prompt is boring, or over detailed??? I'm not sure everyone I know is to lazy to read it, feedback [even if you just ...

About the last sentence, that is perfectly fine! In narrative writing form follows function. This was awesome by the way. All you would have to do [if you want, I ...

Let's see, "cannot" to can not. And I believe the last sentence is not right, it makes no sense to contradict yourself. Maybe go back over this, and string your ...

Actually I'm quite impressed! I got to know more about you as I read through your piece. I think you were able to communicate to your audience well. I hope ...

Courtney R. Period 2 19. Sept. 2008 Lesson Learned Prompt: Treasure Cat A Barbie car, shoes, pajamas, a set of blocks, a teddy bear, and an Easy Bake Oven. Those ...

Edward? What happened? He just didn't even seem like Edward to me anymore, most of the time. Exactly! I felt like his character changed completely, and the chemistry wasn't the ...

The Same Place But Different

I agree with mostly everyone at this point, but I don't think I was in LOVE with the book. I just felt like a lot of things didn't make sense. ...

Chapter Five: Nightmares After my dream about Shoomu I woke up and found her in my room starting at me. I looked at her sitting upright in my bed. And ...