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I liked this poem, and I it was a little broad but over all the reader gets the message. ;).

Well okay I dug it! And you can use THREE exclamation points if you want, thats the limit more than that and its too much. Just wanted to point that ...

I haven't read the third one yet!!! But the first two were awesome :). p.s.- anyone want to give me the low down on the third one?

Actually I liked it and for me it wasn't hard to read. Although I think there are some awkward parts in there and you misspelled "wave" at least I thought ...

Chapter Three Meanwhile, when any one least expected it an experiment was going on in Denver, Colorado. Doctor Stevens a blond who was constantly compared to a certain ABC television ...

hey Jack im with you on most of those and u know which ones! lol. I guess I'm embarassed at loving all the disney movies from the ninities my main ...

I started at three I suppose. My first book was a childrens book...I think it some really old Disney one lol. But I finished my first chapter book in the ...

Well I didn't really get the theme of the poem Am my dearest friend. But it flowed extremely well usually when a read a poem of this lengthn I've got ...

Chapter Two The next day there lay an object in the sky. Not a bird. Not a plane. And this time not even Superman. It was Super Boy. Superman in ...

Okay defintely put some italics or an explanation point on the last word so we as the readers know to emphasize it. And I think your two poems could easliy ...

Reminds me of the motif of fire from Fahrenheit 451...not that it has to do with your poem! But I liked it and yet I am not considered the best ...

Thank you both! To be honest I was so nervous about posting this. I didn't read it again cause I knew I wouldn't post it. [ Mind you I've posted ...

I know I did before but it was in Romantic Ficition...and yeah your right if I did see a huge text I wouldn't want to read it. P.S.- Okay now ...

I was kind of scared to...but it got moved anyway. And I know...*bad SL, bad!*. ;).

Okay someone told this was really bad and was so good! It reminded me of the summer when I started writing and how I always made the male character way ...