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Thanks for the review! And i do see your point about the descirptions. I haven't written in a while and this time I actually tried to make sure my grammar ...

I notice how at school you failed to tell me that you too...had a protagonist named Jerry! My apologizes ahahaha... Then again Jerrry's your protagonist and my Jerry more of...well ...

Part Two Still in my work uniform I made my way to Barnes and Nobles. I needed someone to talk to; my friends. And I don’t mean books were my ...

Part One cont… The next day, Saturday, I was working at the Pizza Reef. I was wondering where Lola, my ex-best friend was. She and I always worked Saturday’s nine ...

I have a feeling I'm going to like the story continues I mean. So I have to say very engaging!

There’s Something About Jerry My Hidden Diary When you first hear his name, you don’t think much. Until he walks in the room and when he does…all you can think ...

Hey! I thought I'd give you a review. I thought this was well written and had good content. :) Maybe if you want to improve it make sure your format ...

Ah, thanks! That was actually helpful and I can see where I need to improve. Most people tell me that in my stories I tell but I don't show...Something like ...

Chapter Four Back in Metropolis Jason was riding in the car home with his father. He knew he had to ask his father some questions. And he knew he was ...

Alone in Paradise My eyes open. And it’s the first I time I remember opening them and seeing…looking. When had they opened before? Seen anything…like I was seeing now. The ...

Haha, that was so...even reading it a second time there are no true words. Awesome job comrade! :)

I live in ananheim and again today there smoke at Buena Park High School...sucks cause for PE they stuck us in the gym and it wasso stuffy in there!!! It ...

I know! We didn't run in Cross Country today because of the ash. :(.There are so many fires....here;s a description : "last night it was sso windy that leaves got ...

Hey *Courteny feels the top of her head in amazement* you didn't chop my head off! And yeah I guess I kind of did lope on the description of the ...

Broken Promises [Note: This was originally a story called Time Walkers, but sadly that story was lost and this scenario can into my head. Sorry if it doesn’t make sense ...