SASSYLADY333

I really enjoyed reading this, I think you're an excellent writer. It was like being in a fifties thriller, or some sort of sci-fi movie. It keep interested from beginning ...

Chapter Three Even though the night of the art show had been a whirlwind it made Shelia and James’s friendship even better. Now they were best friends, every free moment ...

Thank for pointing out the grammatical errors! I knew there was some in there but you know how it is when you read it over and over it looks just ...

Could you review my story Sisterly Love? Here's chapter one: And chapter two: I would appreciate it!

Hey! Yes, I am still reading all of your chapters lol. I really liked the chapter two and three. I think mostly everyone pointed out any errors and such. So ...

Chapter Two James hadn’t been able to get her out of his mind. If he had fallen under the spell of her sister Regina then he was now Shelia’s captive. ...

I saw your eigth chapter up so I thought I'd see what the beginning was like. I love it so far, you put enough into the chapter to keep me ...

Thanks for your reviews! Jessie2009, yes I have written more I'm actually in the process of finishing the whole thing. I'm glad that you liked it! Marci3ly, well you said ...

You're welcome I'm glad I helped :) This is actually the first time I've cricitqued anything in detail so I'm glad you were able to understand what I was telling ...

Chapter One Shelia always felt alone. Shelia was always in locked up in her room drawing and crying while her parents argued. While her sister Regina climbed out the window ...

So I decided I’ll go along with it all and continue the generations, and I still haven’t understood the fact s directly. I think starting off the first chapter with ...

So I decided I’ll go along with it all and continue the generations, and I still haven’t understood the fact s directly. I think starting off the first chapter with ...

Wow, this was really good! I love the storyline so far and I'm beginning to like the characters. There are only a few things you could improve. Like in the ...

Thank you! And I'm always up for new music :)

Thank you! And thank's for point out those errors :). I hate reading it over and over again, and not finding what to correct. Hopefully my teacher felt the same ...