Ryter

Edited: The Decahero story, along with it's counterpart Uberhero, is no longer canon as written here. As is such, I have removed it. Thanks for reading, and I hope you ...

Quite possibly. I'm making this up as I go along. This story is, as most of them are, a product of the imagination. I don't plan ahead in great detail ...

Good call with that, Jonny. I'll add a fix on that. While I want a super super hero, I don't want anything too eccentric. I'll add a set limit and ...

I was two, but I had to put down Other. I'm wierd like that. Ah well. You get used to it.

I agree with the previous replies. It seems like an incomplete idea. So little happens in it, that I almost assumed you pressed the "Submit" button a little early on ...

You've done a good job of keeping the end in mind. (101 Writing Tips on front page of YWS!) But you've driven that tip into the ground. Keep in mind ...

Edited: I've deleted all records of the prototype Uberhero and Decahero story, as it is no longer canon. Thanks for reading it, and I hope you guys get to see ...

You've done a pretty good job so far. The dialog doesn't quite seem natural to me, but for all I know this could be set in the kind of future ...

Great job, overall. Just a few things: He was a tall, wiry man with golden, blonde hair and his name was Samuel Thomas. This line's just a little awkward. Mainly ...