Rysa93

okay,i admit it.iam lack in imaginary.Lol.thanks comment,i'll improve it,sir..:D

i dont really agree about what wewinwelose had said about this poem.:s.there is no error to said 'uh make sense for the writer to write it on their poem.:)It just ...

iam new here too.just want to improve my language.First poem i had submited is really awful!please give me a guidance!n_n

i like it!

Mirror and jewel... You look same with your miracle reflection, but mirror,you're priceless While jewel,you're precious! Jewel... you make people admire me, when you be my necklace. You make me ...

LoL.Yeah,sure i am not good in english!haha.But thanks,nice comments from you all:)

waa,the romantic novel from you is always the fresh one.Lol

good poem for close friend.I really like it. keep writing,because i wish to see more from you!:)

The first words i heard is when I was born to live among them. But unfortunately,I dont remember the words. And when I was grew up, they always telling the ...

'What good’s a YouTube video if it gets no views?'Actually,this line ruined all the beautiful words in this poem:(.But anyway,i like this poem at all;)

Good work from you:)But friend,i still did't get the message that you try to show.Or maybe,i had a bad sense of feeling.Lol.Its seem that you try to say that,there is ...

awesome!nothing i can say.its seem that you really hate war:)wish to see more masterpieces from you.