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Re: THE CHRONICLES OF ALLAN DEVANT -The Lost Words
Introduction My name is Allan Devant. I like reading, playing football, playing guitar and singing. But i love reading the most. Especially stories books. Not the romantic one or other ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Cloud Dreams
waa,you're so amazing!You just create a great poem I ever seen n_n! I really like the way you grab the theme there and the way you wrote it! "I think ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Never Been Loved
Hi there,musiclover.Actually this is a kind of romantic poem plus with sad emotion,I guess n_n.This poem is simple and easy to understand.Your poem is great..But I wish you can put ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: One
wow.This is a great job from you:D i like the theme that you grab thereit really working as a good poem! In the end, when we look back Did we ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: A Private Feeling
wow.This is a great job from you:D i like the theme that you grab thereit really working as a good poem. ' 'It’s a dangerous world inside head, But head ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Mr.Hyde and I(II)
I was sitting in the garden when I saw a man sitting on the bench his head hidden behind the black hat and he holds a wooden staff. I looked ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Instructions for Reading This Poem Aloud to an Audience
wow.You made a awesome poem!I really like your was unique and fantastic to me. "Now, at the end, think but don’t say: ______1) Gods don’t exist without stories ______2) Spirits ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Gone for good.
I really like just like a story line but quit too simple.I wish you could put some pretty words at your poem.But,never still cute:D *'I was crying the whole out ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: The first One
Hi there,taliarose. What are you trying to say to the audiences from your poem?Sorry,because I dont understand about what you want to say through your poem.Maybe because I didt have ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Mr.Hyde and I
[color=#400040] He was born from the darkness and hid behind a good-hearted man He hated the children and beat them with his staff. When night comes he appears as a ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Too Young To Understand
I could feel the sad tone from your poem here.I could see that the writer is confuse about the things happen around him/her,but still the writer cannot do anything to ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Reminiscence
actually this poem can be shortened but still give the same the way,i like the way you grab this theme become a pretty poem for the audiens.Good job from you.keep ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Oh What A Pretty Smile
i was smiled when i read this poem.Lol The theme you grab here is so cool,smile and love theme will always be a fresh theme to be grab.Good job from ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: If you hate me...
I'd like the look that you really 'hate' when hated by your own friend.Or you feel betreyed when your friend didt tell you that she/he doesnt like you.But I think ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Even Then...
Nice poem.yup,love your sweetheart until the end of the world!:D
Nov 15, 2011
