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Gregory "Easy does it," I murmured as I helped her up for the second time and half carried her back to the house where I settled her in her room ...

Gregory I scanned the grounds, searching for Elizabeth and then I caught sight of a hand and a scrap of black protruding from behind a tree in the distance. Could ...

Isabelle "No, good idea. Yes, search the grounds!" I ran to the door and slipped my feet into a pair of shoes that lay against the wall. Gregory, who had ...

Gregory When I entered the house it was to find it all asunder. The sound of footsteps echoed through the halls and avid searchers hurried past me, worry etched deep ...

Hey there! I love the ending of this chapter, dear. A little predictable I'm afraid but good nonetheless. I take it that Autumn is the one who didn't get a ...

Then it still makes little sense - you write lovely poetry, dear.

Giving examples will help and talking them through briefly what a syllable is. It should be pretty straight forward but then, I suppose that depends on the age of the ...

I'm in quite a poetic mood so why not - your name: 'That which we call a rose By any other name would smell as sweet' so whether I be ...

Hello there phoebe, you seem to have started quite a stir within our little society, yes? For that I say well done and welcome! Though you would have had the ...

I think it's lovely! Especially all the ripples, very nice. I think the only part I'm not so sure about is the candy cane. It looks a touch strange. Maybe ...

I'm reasonably excited. Certainly enough that I'll be buying a copy.

Yeah, I noticed the Iambic beat and it was a good attempt but some of the lines were out by a syllable. I can explain how the stresses work actually ...

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Gregory It was a hot, stuffy day, the sort you get after many weeks of rain when the air vibrates with the thrum of society. I walked down to the ...