Rydia

Hey there Timea. To be honest, I don't think I liked this chapter as well as I did the others. There's an awful lot of dialogue and explanations and not ...

Adelaide Adelaide was slightly irritated by the human's lack of communication. She watched as he turned the pages of his book, not looking up, barely acknowledging her presence. Stepping across ...

Great work Nate! I'll take a look.

Gregory The butler entered with the second letter as I was helping Catherine into her dress, ready to attend the latest ball. I heard the knock upon the door and ...

Gregory I located a quill and dipped it into navy blue ink before holding it poised above a blank piece of prachment. Where to begin? Dearest Elizabeth, No. I started ...

Hey there! I agree with Bubbles - the concept of 'Same old story' is good but you need to develop your poem further. The technique of repetition is a little ...

Gregory There was a knock at the door to my father's study where I had retired after the evening meal. "Come in," I called. My butler, who I was still ...

Gregory "You can't sit up here and read books all day!" Catherine complained, stepping into the light of my lantern. I looked up to see her pleasant blue eyes frowning ...

15:10. Adelaide Stroth. Adelaide studied the ship for a while but she had little interest in technology and showed even less admiration of the elegant curves and well chosen colour ...

Marianne The man looked up as I took my seat and nodded stiffly. "Hello," I greeted him. He hesitated and then nodded again and held out his hand which I ...

It's very small so it's hard to see any of the finer detail but it's not a bad cartoon. I think the text is hard to read in that colour ...

Hey there! You're in luck, I'm quite familiar with Valentine. In fact, I'll open a copy so I can compare the style with yours. From my first reading, I think ...

Marianne "Where are you going?" Eliza, my flat mate, asked as I shrugged into my smart, black coat and then gathered the huge folder that held my portfolio. "Job interview, ...

Heather I waited for the smoke cloud to clear before venturing out, climbing through the hole quickly and throwing my arms around each of them in turn. "I'm so glad ...

Oh wow, now that's an opportunity I look forward to! Raven I could not tell you how much time passed before I realised that I was awake again. I tried ...