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I'll see what I can do Jas... Julian "Should we leave?" Abigail wondered as she, Sir Dewar, Isabelle and I watched after our friends. "Not at all," Isabelle protested. "Another ...

Amber -How do we get past them?- Lana wondered as the group of scientists blocking the exit grew and grew. "This way looks as good as any," I replied with ...

Info dumps are to be avoided and I would class the example given as one but sometimes the occasional spill of information is necessary. I think then that they're acceptable.

I think the head is a little out of proportion with the rest of the body but the details are great and it's generally very well drawn. I think the ...

No, characters seem to be sharing rooms.

Yay, I get two girls =) I don't think past relationships between the new bodys would be known Bella but feel free to have your character fall in love with ...

Beautiful as always Suzie =)

Okay, one sec, I'll change that.

Amber "Hold still," I commanded as the mongoose struggled in my grip, biting Matt's arm with sharp little teeth. Fortunately, I couldn't feel his pain. Interesting. The mongoose snarled at ...

Amber "Please help me," I whispered as the man continued to study me. "What?" he gasped, looking up. "Please. I'm so lonely." His eyes met my own molton pools of ...

Hey there, welcome to the site! I'm not too interested in the green movement but I'm sure you'll find someone who is (we have a great variety of members) and ...

Hey there Alice, I'm not too great at critiquing lyrics but here's a little advice - I’ve tried to pick up the shattered pieces Of my heart up off the ...

Amber I dared not move, knowing how easy it would be to brush against the electro-magnetic field around me. By my calculations, I was now hovering just behind the front ...

I like this chapter. You convey the emotions of your characters very well and it was nice to have the weak character of Julia to contrast the others against. I ...

Name= The doctors like to call her Kira (kee-rah) which she refuses to answer to but her name used to be Amber. Age= 23 Race= Wraith Ability= Originally she had ...