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"Sceince fiction? My genre all the way," Kitty agreed, feeling much more comfortable now that a more knowledgable member was here to help them, "But where exactly do we have ...

Alexia now unknown male. "How's the head?" Steve asked, leaning casually against the frame of the helicopter, the sort of pose that makes you think drug dealer on a street ...

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Hey all, this poem is written in the style of Larkin's This Be The Verse which is the reason for the rating so if you don't like swearing, don't read ...

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Hello there and welcome to the site! If you have any questions or would like a critique, feel free to pm me. And why not ramble about yourself for a ...

Adelle Performing in the street never earned me much. I finished the lament and moved onto a series of jokes and amusing stories which gathered me quite an audience but ...

Alexia now unknown male. "Got to be better than being a baby," Steve scoffed, waddling over towards the group. I followed him absently, still feeling rather light headed. "But you've ...

Hey Alice! You're right, this isn't your best work but I think you're working with a good base and you could build it up into something stronger. Now, I'm going ...

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Hi there! I think this could be an interesting beginning with some work but you need to add more description and characterization. Some of your sentences sound a little fragmented ...

"Grow wings and fly?" Kitty suggested, only half joking. All three of them looked wistfully up at the bar far above them from their position atop the featured member's box. ...

Raven "That's our great idea?" Warren demanded as together we all aimed at the ground, creating a huge explosion of rock and mud. "No, it's our only idea," I replied. ...

(This is post thirteen so two more, right?) Raven "Let's just hope it doesn't do it again!" Warren exclaimed, staring at the fading red light on the Husk's head. "We ...

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