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Scipio open fired on the spammians with a newly aquired lazor pistol. "Where did you get that?" Alice asked as she ducked a blow from one of the aliens. "Weapons ...

Azael "Have you lowered anyone down this way before? How do you know that it's safe?" Tadgh demanded as the last strand of Astoria's hair was swallowed by golden sand ...

Azael "My name's Azael. Venom lagoon isn't much further and it's worth the danger." Azael stopped at what appeared to be a dead end, beside an illedgible sign planted firmly ...

Day 8. 8:40 am. Katalyn. Katalyn woke slowly, drawing the sleeping bag and blankets closer to her frozen body as she rubbed life into her limbs before pulling the neatly ...

Bandwagons are fun...

I don't mind taking violet instead. I'll edit the bio in just a moment.

Still got those last three to finish but I think I'll leave them until tomorrow. Hope you don't mind and feel free to add more to the list. I've worked ...

Hey there! I think you have a good start here. A nice, mysterious opening, some good description, high atmosphere and a very strong, natural tone. However, I think it could ...

Azael Azael was slightly irritated when Astoria joined in the list of instructions but she seemed to be doing pretty well, directing the man down the path they had taken. ...

My first impression is that you need to spell-check and proof read before posting next time. Seriously. Reading chapters filled with spelling mistakes is very tiresome for grammar nazis such ...

Good action scene here and I like the parallel between the enemy soldiers and the 'good' side. Your humour continues nicely, I think Caboose's comment about the tank was a ...

Hello again! I think this chapter was a little more drawn out and not quite as funny as the last but it was good and the new character is brilliant. ...

I've heard about this series actually. Not much except that a friend of mine was categorising our group as the characters and said I'd have to be Simmons because there's ...

You have some beautiful descriptions here and a very well paced introduction. I think that chapter one needs a touch more character description but the setting is lovely and the ...

Azael "Think he can make it?" Astoria asked as Azael stared up at the slim, poorly nourished man. Fool. He watched a little longer as the man slipped and shuffled ...