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Hey there, just a few small suggestions first - She noticed he was sweating as she glanced back to the road before her, mentally readying herself for the battle to ...

Azael "I wont do it, Gerain. Not if you find a hundred volunteers." The older man smirked and shook his head. "Stubborn as ever, Azael. I have a hundred volunteers ...

I have to agree with Colly here. This poem is sweet but it verges on the unoriginal. It's nice and it's well written and it's one of those poems that ...

Violet Fern smiled at Violet and she smiled back, wondering if that sweet melody was running through her head as well. The words did not matter and they were nothing ...

Yes, that's great, thanks. Azael It was a short walk to the cavern that the First had made their home but by the end of it, Astoria was being carried ...

Raven The kiss was intense and full of all the passion that Luke and Raven felt for each other. Her body shifted forward, as if of its own will to ...

Violet "Very much," Violet replied firmly, determined to be the strong sister in this discussion. "As much as you." Fern nodded and Violet set her sewing aside to lay an ...

They're the connections - He [Azael] spent his first two years in hope and high spirits, helping out those he found in the pits and gathering a group of survivors ...

That's okay. Good to have you back, even if you are sort of grounded :razz: Welcome, Sock. Azael On the outside, Azael appeared calm as he moved across the rocks, ...

Thank you, Camille. Just to be clear, my descriptions of the characters were metaphorical, haha. They're just ordinary humans, I think someone's been reading too much fantasy ;) I made ...

Violet Violet measured out a length of thread before answering in slow, even tones. "Aunt Rosemary can be tough, but she's fair and she would not treat them ill." Fern ...

Violet Fern and Violet sat huddled around the phone as they waited for Holly to pick up. Violet drummed her fingers gently against the bed and Fern held a smile ...

Raven "Thank you," Raven said softly, her lips forming a weak smile. "Oh I'm so silly. Crying over nightmares like a little girl." She laughed lightly and reached up to ...

Good idea, Nate.

*Also moved to the lounge* blacktiger, please post only original works in the literary forums. Thank you.