Rydia

Violet "Fern, we need to set off," Violet gently shook her sister awake, feeling guilty because she was sure Fern had only just managed to actually fall asleep. "I've made ...

At least something remains then. I can't even remember starting that one and text speech? I'm completely ashamed! Haha. I really wouldn't be the writer I am today without the ...

Raven Raven stared at the creature as Izuki dragged it towards the fire and felt a sudden instinct to run over and hold the girl against her body but she ...

That's such a lot of posts, Suzie! And you are amazing because of your commitment to the site!

Violet "Don't you worry miss, we'll catch him," Glenn said, striding down the stairs and gesturing for his men to follow. They hesitated a moment and then released each of ...

I think it was a little under a month ago and I've tried it several times since then, hoping it was just down temporary or something wrong with my computer ...

And then a new character called N rode in on a silver horse!

Happy Easter to you all!

I'm now up-to-date with all critiques so far so feel free to give me a few more links.

This flowed really well and it develops the persona's character further but I think you need to work on description and I think you need to build up the tension ...

Have you tried writing in your room with just a little background noise, like some music but nothing too loud or heavy that would distract you? Or is there a ...

A few small suggestions first - “Matthew?” He looks up at me, his brown eyes boring into mine. [You've used this imagery before when with the father and it doesn't ...

I have done occasionally, when I've written a piece based on or inspired by a quote but in general I don't. For my most recent joint novel, we're pretty sure ...

Hey there James, welcome to YWS! If you have any questions or would like a critique, feel free to pm me any time. So what are you interested in? Do ...

Hey there Tina, welcome to the site! If you have any questions, would like a critique or are interested in the buddy system, feel free to pm me. What are ...