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Violet Violet couldn't help but show surprise at the very obvious display of affection between her sister, Fern, and James but she also felt a dim glow of happiness. Fern ...

Hello there, welcome to the site! As aestar101 says, you need to write two reviews for every piece of literary work you post on YWS so if you could review ...

I think you've chosen a good feeling/ emotion to base your poem on but it could be done in a more thought-provoking manner. I think it's good that this is ...

I think that's really cool. My parents would never agree to do it but I'll turn the lights out in whatever room I'm sitting in and I'm sure I can ...

This is good. I love the idea of a group of circus people running a ship but I think you need to consider the realness of the situation and be ...

Hey there Emily, welcome to YWS! Why not tell us a little more about yourself? What do you like doing when you're not writing? If you have any questions or ...

Violet "Wait..." Violet hesitated as she held her sister back. "Let's not be too... hasty, okay? Let's not tell them too much." "About James you mean?" Fern asked. Violet nodded ...

Ayame This is much too easy, Ayame thought as she lifted the man's hat from his head and placed it upon his female companion. Having already emptied their purses, she ...

Name: Ayame (It means Iris in Japanese and is pronounced I-ya-may) Age: 11 but she appears to be about 23 Date of Birth: 5th December 1996 Appearnce: She is tall ...

That's awesome. Thanks Matt and Nate!

Great work Grif, that shows some real dedication to the site! Thank you.

A few suggestions first - Axel and Hank were behind a nearby rock watching the events unfold. “After seeing him in action like this I’m really glad Tex is on ...

Raven "Who is she?" Raven wondered, her eyes lingering on the esper's pale face that appeared to have been sculptured out of ice. Her dark blue hair hung in braids, ...

Philippa "Pippa, take the pendant and leave!" Pippa's mother shouted, gathering her strength so that she could struggle to her feet. "But Mum..." "Go Pippa, bring back help. I can ...

Some small suggestions first - Especially George was genius, although she'd never admit it. [This is worded awkwardly. Maybe 'George was especially genius, although...'] Lucy couldn't help but making