Rydia

This has a soothing, pretty quality to it, Jas. I really like it, it's very different to much of your poetry because while there's that sad melody mingled with the ...

Violet Aidan drew level with Holly and though James and Fern whispered to each other, the sound did not reach Violet's ears and so she heard only the wind as ...

This is very thought provoking dear and you have some beautiful imagery. I agree with most of what Kit has said but I thought I'd add a few comments of ...

Banned for aiding the CCF!

“Well, it’s kinda hard to explain,” the newcomer said. “Umm… You were shot in the head, buddy. So, here you are.” [I don't think 'newcomer' is the best description as ...

Raven "Thank you," Raven said, flexing the arm, delighted to find that it no longer hurt and actually felt stronger than before. "Okay now lets take this woman down!" Izuki ...

I think this is pretty good. The colouring is lovely and the little stars are really cute. I think the expression is rather strange but then, that makes for an ...

Hey there Johanna, welcome to YWS! If you have any questions about the site or would like a critique on some of your work, feel free to pm me. Do ...

Could you change your age please, Tamora? Only that would make her nine when she was a member of the coven. I think characters are going to have to be ...

Discuss any ideas here.

There was once a coven of thirteen witches who each controlled a different power. Originally, they were kind and gentle, using their powers to protect the humans from the evil ...

Welcome back Sohini and Meshugenah! Did you have a good time, Bekah? You simply must tell us all about your trip!

I stumbled on my feet once and I figured we must be in the bow from its pointed shape. This also must’ve been where the crew slept because it is ...

Those are some really good photos. They're a little out of focus in places but those kittens are so cute! I love the last one with the dark and light. ...

Ayame "Calm down," the voice spoke again and still Ayame couldn't discover its source. She ran an eye over the people passing by but none were looking in her direction. ...