Rydia

I found April 1 a little repetitive to be honest but April 2 is fantastic! I'm not sure about the last line of the first stanza, it feels a little ...

A joint effort between TN and myself. Many thanks for all the help with dialogue, dear xx Katalyn Katalyn stared at the words, attempting to absorb them but she'd never ...

They quit their jobs with their aunt.

This one needs major editing and it started with just one line but I think I actually quite like it. Suggestions are more than welcome, especially concerning the title. #2. ...

Raven Raven went first to Luke who lay motionless on the floor, his flesh pale with the cold. She knelt beside him and placed a gentle hand upon his brow, ...

Haha. Not quite what I had in mind, no. Oh Jas will you not write one perfectly happy poem, just for me? And if not for me, why not write ...

Thank you for the comments everyone! I've made Jas's amendment so far but I'll do some major editing as I write the next.

Ayame Ayame's bare feet squelched across the grass, spraying droplets of water in her wake as she raced through the park. She didn't know where to go. She even considered ...

Fantastic! Thank you Nate, this will be so much fun =)

I suppose I might as well post my poems somewhere and here is as good as my blog. Feel free to give me some tips and hopefully the quality will ...

It's day one and already I'm struggling for a theme or topic for my poetry so I've decided to create this thread where people may post themes, ideas and pictures ...

Hey there! I think you've got a good, strong chapter here. You could have had more character and setting description - you mention the table cloth at one point so ...

Avoiding the big wet German Shepherd that whined for her attention, she swung open the low white picket fence and began skipping along the road, swinging a piece of string ...

...but it's it still like 530pm there? It's traditionally twelve noon when April Fool's Day ends.

Hush, I'm going by British time =)