Rydia

Serenity, you need to write an introductory post so that the other writers know where your character is and can start to get a feel for your personality. Then we'll ...

Alicia Alicia pouted a little when she realised she wasn't being followed but reigned Megan in and, dismounting, walked her back towards the fence. She smiled again when she heard ...

Rydia "I see," Rydia said coolly. "Well then I have another... business arrangement for you. Persephone, let me speak easy with you. Something is not right with the world, I ...

Alicia "Me run a summer camp? Do you really think anyone would take me seriously?" Alicia tilted her head to one side, a blond curl passing across her face as ...

April 1: Beautiful. I agree that it could have been more concise and clearer but the ending is marvellous and the imagery is just splendid. I really can find nothing ...

Stage three is adorable!

Haha, sorry about that Via, guess I wasn't thinking but you're a beautiful horse at least. Alicia "What, these sandals?" Alicia asked, feigning innocence, folding her leg up and extending ...

April 1: There's some pretty imagery but it's a little simple and unoriginal. It needs to make a stronger point, it needs more to catch the attention of your reader. ...

don't say a word: [I really think you should capitalise the D. Even if you avoid standard grammar elsewhere, I think it would make for a more dramatic start.] hide ...

April 3: This is lovely, dear. You have a great sense of colour and you make the point so strongly. Just two small typos I noticed: He [s]sneared[/s] sneered at ...

April 6: I like this one. There's a great sense of atmosphere around it and the emotion is very strong. You have some lovely phrases here, especially the repetition of ...

April 4: Such pretty description, my love but I agree that it would be better if you had a theme or a story behind it rather than just the description. ...

Raven "I thought it was very scary," Izuki said quietly. "I wish I could be brave like all of you." Raven smiled at her and gently ruffled her hair, ignoring ...

Hmm. I think I'll go with Megan actually. Alicia "Apparently that is now your horse. Know how to mount it?" The man talked with a thick, southern accent that Alicia ...

Just as a note, Alicia's horse isn't called Andalusian, that's its breed, lol. Guess I should have made that clearer. Sorry. I'm not sure about a name, actually. Feel free ...