Rydia

April 13: But now I'm back under my own gey sky I think this should be grey, yes? This poem is interesting and I love the title and the start ...

This one has a lovely flow and though it was a touch drawn out, I think the tone is lovely and certainly not completely without impishness. There's such a lovely, ...

April 1: I agree that the rhyme in that second stanza is off, also, I think you should add an extra line so that it's four in length like the ...

A few small suggestions first - It was only natural that I would run out of places to explore eventually, [Maybe a semi colon here?] the island only had so ...

See, Nate. This is why we love you! I'm glad you decided to stick with the old chat and the updates are really good =)

I'm not sure. I think Via might be waiting for one or two others but it should be pretty soon. And I love your character's sexual orientation. Should prove to ...

Rory, the rules state that 23 is the minimum age...

It's not the 18th!

And it isn't seconds... hmmm. I really don't know...

Of course not!

Sincere apologies for locking the thread, I didn't check the link properly. However, I'd like to inform you of the rule to review two pieces before posting your own. You're ...

I very rarely beg but... if you have the time?

This is unfinished (still) and normally I'm very against posting such rough work on the site but I'd really appreciate some feedback. Could you see a revised version of this ...

Hey there Lucas, welcome to the site! It's lovely to meet you. What genre do you enjoy to read/ write? And what do you do in your spare time other ...

I'm not too bad thank you, and yourself? Welcome to the site! If you have any questions or would like a critique then feel free to pm me and I'll ...