Rydia

A few small comments/ suggestions first, dear - I listened to the shouting. The angry whispers followed by screams had become normal. [I think the beginning would be more dramatic ...

Gregory The voices started to get through and Gregory looked at the inhabitants of the room one at a time. "Can I get you some... water?" Gregory asked. He moved ...

Jas, love. You know I'm here. Every storybook to the end, right? Forever. Tell me to post and I'll post. I can't promise quality but I'll post.

Gregory "Oh congratulations!" Isabelle exclaimed. "Why are they not done?" Gregory demanded, leaping to his feet again and resuming his pacing. "Elizabeth's with child, Greg. Isn't that wonderful?" Is

Kestrel "Yeah, clubbing can be fun but... wont you come, Stella? It would be nice if there was someone else I knew," Kes replied with a small smile. "Now you ...

I think it's a good idea.

Rydia Rydia crossed the room and opened the window, looking down at the three barely recognisable witches as they argued, shouted; bickered. "I'm sorry. I have people I promised I ...

Name- Skye Woodrow Speices- Traditional Elf Age- 19 Hair Colour- Long and silvery blond Eye colour- Blue-grey Personality- Bubbly. There is no other way to describe Skye. She laughs, she ...

Hey there, all. Kyte mentioned the group and I thought I'd check it out. I'm a regular co-writer, over phone, msn, person-to-person. You name the method and I've probably tried ...

First, I'd like to commend you on a very carefully crafted reflection of Russian literature. I think your description was lacking in places and your change in character perspectives not ...

This is great, Adam. You portray such a strong sense of atmosphere and emotion! Your tense needs some work and I have a few structural suggestions but generally, it can't ...

Your critique on a single poem far surpasses the little thoughts and comments I wrote for yours. Thank you so much =) I don't think I like this next one ...

April 1: I like this one. I think it could have been more poetic, concentrating on the imagery more than the narrative but it was good and the persona is ...

Kestrel Kestrel took a few tentative steps into the room, hoping and praying that they weren't the type to leave things on the floor -- how she hated being tripped ...

I haven't read her novel but I've come across her poetry before and touched upon her work somewhere along my English course (Her husband, Ted hughes did a re-write on ...