Rydia

I'd love to be included.

I'm in but not of my choice *grumbles at Reyu*

April 19: I don't like the line - And perhaps a couple more. - because it feels colloquial, out of place and a little unecessary but other than that, I ...

This is as annoying as trying to guess the date of the next name change!

Password= Gibberish XD *goes to try...*

April 15: This one is interesting. I love the rhythm and the repitition works really well but you should expand on your imagery, especially 'the moon is in bloom' because ...

That's okay, Dynamo. I don't mind if you use my character a little and it moved the plot on pretty well. Kestrel "No," Kestrel cut in, "No, no, I'm fine. ...

I don't think I took part in Elven Paradise but I was involved in quite a few others. What was your screen name on TYWC?

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback everyone! I have some ideas of how to finish this now and I can see that the content is at least vaguely ...

This is a good start, I think. It’s a little lacking in character and scene description so your atmosphere isn’t as strong as it could be and you need to ...

"I have a better idea," Heather said. "Oh? And what might that be?" Alice raised an eyebrow but the group stopped and gathered around eagerly. "Let's split up!" Heather suggested ...

That sounds pretty cool. But let's have it hit and miss for now, okay? In fact, I think I have some ideas of how to work with this and by ...

I take it these are clues as to the password?

Kestrel "He's coming over!" Sally hissed. Kestrel listened carefully to his confident, solid step. "Good evening ladies, I take it you're all going out to a late night lecture?" The ...

I forgot to mention that I ended up in the centre of York which, naturally, was filled with people dressed in armour, carrying shield and swords. I was vaguely tempted ...