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Billy "Get up!" Billy growled as he launched a kick at one of the pirates. "I said... get up!" Groans issued across the deck where the majority of men lay ...

You should be thinking of moving on if you're getting that many flawless fights.

It turned out that Chad’s surprise had been a makeshift photo studio. He knew I loved to take pictures and planned to be a freelance photographer when I grew up. ...

This is interesting. I think there could be more description and atmosphere but the characters are well defined (not so much the aunt and uncle though) and the plot is ...

Raven As the group settled down, Raven looked out into the distance, Luke's hand held gently in her own. His breathing had slowed some time ago and just a trickle ...

Crimson Tear: Captain: Bloody Jill (21) First Mate: Richard (31) Crew: Zen (17) Nigel (22) Crashing: Captain: Nash (20) First Mate: Crew: Cate (16) Jake (19) Deliah (16) Jack (16) ...

Hey there Lauren, it's lovely to meet you! Welcome to the site =) If you have any questions or would like a critique then feel free to pm me and ...

Kestrel I thought it best not to tell Stella but while running, I had witnessed a strange event. At first, the white figure appeared to have been destroyed and then ...

I’d [s]past[/s] passed the half way mark of my pregnancy and I was feeling extremely disorganised. And finally, why I [s]know[/s] now lay under the covers with the picture from ...

Name= Andonesia Nickname= Andy Age= 19 Objects= The wallet and the crucifix Appearance= She has long, chestnut brown hair and sharp, dark green eyes. Her face is pretty with delicate, ...

I suppose it wouldn't hurt to post it now? It was (just to be cautious here's a spoiler box): canoe72

I [s]seeked[/s] sought out Tom’s hand and squeezed. ___________________ This chapter was good but I felt that it was a little too simple. I think that it needs to be ...

Two small suggestions - He even had the same black piercing eyes which gave him his scary look. [This is a little awkward. Perhaps 'He even had those small, piercing ...

1. You need a certain number of posts - I think 500 - before you can edit your title. 2. Yes. There are quite a few though I have not ...

Kestrel I saw it again. A figure in the darkness, outlined in a blue light so bright it hurt my eyes. It wasn't far away now and where it stood, ...