Rydia

Hahaha. Oh wow, those are pretty cool and at the same time rather scary...

Hey there, lovely to meet you and welcome to the site! Now why not go back and fill in the details about your life :razz: What are your interests both ...

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Philippa "Who are you?" Pippa tried to calm her throbbing heart; there wasn't time for panic. "Philippa Dawson," she answered. "Please help me. My mother's trying to hold the demons ...

Kestrel Kestrel tried hard not to stare at either the red flame figure or the blue flame figure and instead directed her gaze towards the faint, grey outline in front ...

A second character sounds tempting but I'm not sure if I have the time. Andy After collecting orders, the waitress walked away, her slim hips swaying from side to side ...

I'd be glad to delete the content of the post for you and lock the thread so no more comments can be posted, if you're sure? Pm me and let ...

Hey there, Cara, welcome to the site! If you have any questions, desire a critique or would like to get to know one of the members then feel free to ...

Saturday (1): Youth is an arrogant age. I love this phrase but sometimes your structures confuse me. Why not have it all on the second line? Beauty and insight are ...

I agree that your font needs to be clearer and maybe outline the girl's body with either black or red - the pencil looks a little unfinished or unprofessional. The ...

This is lovely, I wish I could see the actual 'tapestry' or rug, whichever you'd prefer to call it. I love looking at them and brushing the wool different ways ...

1. It's not the best caption and it would be better if half the bowl wasn't cut off but it's pretty and colourful. 2. The trouble with this one is ...

It’s good at keeping secrets. Never telling anyone, never offering salvation, it just watched. [I agree that this sentence is a little awkward and in the least, I'd suggest just ...

I'm not sure about this. Your character, Matthew didn't feel realistic to me and that made this scene hard to visualise. He's a kid, probably sixteen, seventeen? Maybe younger? And ...

Arianna "That's it, take it easy, okay?" Ari beamed at Lucy and turned to see the red haired girl darting away. "Ari..." Lucy swayed a little again so Arianna pulled ...