Rydia

She had a pair of sandals in one hand and her [s]hand bag[/s] hand-bag in the other. I picked up my mobile and began out the room. [I'd suggest either ...

A few brief comments: He was at his closet, in the middle of putting in a flannel shirt over a tank top and jeans. [This sounds a little awkward and ...

Just a few small comments to add to what the others have pointed out - I eased out of it for a moment, feeling both giddy and [s]both[/s] overwhelmed. As ...

Twelve days left. Forty-nine critiques. Can I do it? Only time will tell :razz:

Thank you everyone! MrMarathon - The rhyme with 'pass' wasn't intentional though the rest was. Pass just seemed to fit quite snugly but I can see how it's all a ...

Arianna "Lex - one of the officers - said there won't be enough evidence to stick but what he doesn't know is that we were probably caught on tape approaching ...

Arianna "Hey Mom!" Ari called out as she entered her house, leading Lucy through to the sleek, black living room. Gently lowering Lucy into a black, leather chair, she hurried ...

Then play Prue, Games end. Is that not the character you chose anyway? I don't mean to be rude but trying to keep track of all these extras is so ...

Review spamming is constantly posting reviews of no more than a line or two to raise your review count. As to posting in the advanced forums, the guide to that ...

Now we're really making progress =) Isn't it amazing that this has survived for a whole nine pages on such a small piece of conflict? That is down to you ...

Yes, we are unfortunately.

Hush Twitters. Don't give them ideas...

And me too! You're awesome, Nate!

It's 'orbing' and welcome to the team =)

Andy Andy looked across at the boy and grinned. "Hey there," she greeted him, "this is Kat, Davis and William. I'm Andonesia." "Andonesia?" Davis asked, one eyebrow raised. "Yeah, that's ...