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The Queen She waited patiently until they were all watching her, the short, chubby boy glaring defiantly while the others were curious and reasonably respectful. And then she waited a ...

Kestrel I grabbed the covers in my hands and tore them away, not quite sure what I intended to do as Kai and Mother fought, each weaving in and out; ...

Sorry it's taken me so long to get this profile written, Amber Name= Vanessa Age= 16 and three quarters Appearance= Vanessa is tall with rich, chocolate brown skin and dark, ...

Could do. What does everyone else think?

Sorry about the delay, kept getting interrupted every time I started a post... Kestrel "Mother!" I opened the door hurriedly as soon as I realised that it really was her ...

A few suggestions and comments - Lady Jasmine sat on a cushioned stool behind Lady Cassara, complimenting her[/olor] on how [s]good the dress looked on her[/s] [color=red]lovely the dress looked; ...

1. I love the colour and atmosphere of this photo. The focus on the guitar is good and the lighting is beautiful. I wouldn't suggest changing anything. 2. The contrast ...

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This has potential but I think you need to work on the details a little; add more description. At the moment, the action is moving quite rapidly which in general ...

Name: Isaac Brewer Age: 31 Race: Caucasian Gender: Male Height: 5'12''/ 183cm Weight: 171 lb/ 78kg Crewmen (If you feel that you need another islander, I'm willing to switch)

Andonesia "Good... because there's somewhere I need to be too." Andy didn't wave -- which in itself was strange -- as she set off with long, regular strides down the ...

Sorry, was a bit stuck on what to post and finding it hard to keep track of how many thugs have been taken out. Raven "They keep getting up!" Izuki ...

LUKE We have that thing tomorrow, with Harvey. We should get home soon. Simone turns and watches as Luke disappears into the bathroom. James clears his throat, a mischievous grin ...

This is developing really well, Griff. The humour is spot on and your inclusion of YWS members and back-stories makes for a fantastic read but I would like to see ...

Kestrel "Are you going to be okay?" Stella asked at the door to Kestrel's room. She nodded and hurriedly pushed the door open, closing it with a soft click behind ...