Rydia

Haha. Or how about Big kitty - let's go with family pets!

Lol. Congratulations Snoink!

This is a good photo, though I wonder if you could resize it as it's stretching the board and also, hard to view properly. I think it lacks focus where ...

Time for a more in depth critique now that I've read both chapters but to start, a few small comments and suggestions: "Yep. Thrilled." [Comma rather than full stop.] I ...

I wouldn't mind another review on Sirens' Symphony seen as you appear to be so desperate ;)

1. It would be better if part of the drawing wasn't missing but I like this. The hair is a bit too smooth - but then that's anime for you ...

Comments and suggestions first: “Rebecca! Dad's waiting! Let's go!” said Mom, trying to juggle all of her bags at once. [I'd suggest 'Dad's waiting, Let's go!' so that your dialogue ...

As before, I will pm the main file and suggestions to you. Overall, this is good, your plot is still advancing well and your characters are increasingly well defined. Take ...

I didn't like this chapter quite as much as the previous two; I think the action is a little rushed and confusing. You need to slow down a bit and ...

Warren "Sounds simple enough," Warren decided, "we'll be sailing in less then an hour, come on." He set off striding down the street and after a moment's hesitation, the others ...

Andonesia Andy didn't recognise the short, chubby receptionist at the desk with her bleach-blonde hair pulled back in a tight, high ponytail and her grey eyes framed by half-moon spectacles. ...

Kestrel Singing... I could hear singing in such a sad, beautiful voice. It was Mother. Mother was singing to me. I smiled happily but... I couldn't see her. Where was ...

Well the title says it all. Apparently Big Sister are now in charge as opposed to Big Brother?

Maybe the heroes send a group to spy on the villains and some members of the group are captured so there's a rescue mission etc?

Shadowcat. 11:30pm. Kitty disliked the hotel room immediately. It was cramped - barely enough room for a single bed - and the worn, grey carpet was smothered with scuff marks ...