Rydia

Name= Richard Stones. Age= 27. Appearance= Richard is handsome with a well toned, medium tanned body, black, slightly curly hair and forget-me-not blue eyes. He sometimes dresses in suits and ...

Hello there, it's lovely to meet you and what an interesting life you have led! I'm sorry that you got rejected by Cambridge. In true Yorkshire fashion, I didn't apply ...

This is absolutely beautiful! I almost don't want to critique it because my suggestions will be so inadequate beside such a lovely poem. But I will try... The cherry-blossom petals ...

Hey there Dan, it's nice to meet you, welcome to the site! Why not tell us a little about yourself? What's your favourite genre to read/ write and what hobbies ...

Question: Who knows of their powers? Do their parents? Does Michael? Vanessa "Vanessa, dear," My mother called up the stairs, "Vanessa?" I hugged my knees to my chest and felt ...

Hello! Okay, I think I'll start with a few specific comments and suggestions: The lights hurt my eyes a little as I walked into the village square, but I didn’t ...

Hey there, Kalli. Sorry it took me so long to get to this... Happy Birthday [The first thing that needs to be considered is your title. I like how misleading ...

Julian "Allow me to escort you home," Julian offered, standing despite the protests that he expected and then pausing with surprise, hovering beside his chair when he realised that she ...

"Someone's about to teleport here!" Heather exclaimed, stepping back from a door she had been about to open and pulling Bella out of the way just as Nutty materialised. "Hey ...

This was good. I can't say that the plot 'twist' was completely unexpected as it wasn't but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I'd like to see a deeper, more gruesome description ...

And now she has long fingernails apparently.

Hello there, it's nice to meet you, welcome to the site! If you're unsure what to do, you might want to start by reading the FAQ - - but feel ...

This is developing very well, your characterization is wonderful, the emotions are portrayed beautifully and the plot is structured well, it fits in very snugly with your narration. However, you ...

A few small points first: I walked into the kitchen and held up the note as if I was brandishing a lost piece of treasure. “He’s gone home. [A strange ...

Kestrel Tears flooded down my face as I clenched my teeth against the searing pain and tried to maintain eye contact with the blue aura but I couldn't make out ...