Rydia

SPEW gets the secret underground basement!

Happy birthday to you both!

Raven The echo of that terrible voice resounded in Raven's mind as they headed towards the docks; she was filled with confusion. Caim's shocked, frightened face would not be banished ...

Kestrel "Okay," Kes replied, lifting her bag onto her shoulder as she walked down the hall at a slower pace, listening to Stella's fading footsteps. She had her second English ...

I know! Seriously people, don't let Nate fool you so easily, it only goes to his head!

These are all amazing changes, Nate, particularly the last one! I would strangle you with love if you weren't half-way across the world XD

The last two sections are good but I think you need to add just a little bit more description, like show us how the clothes are ugly rather than telling ...

Rydia As they moved steadily through the woods, the need for the location crystal expired: they could hear the familiar voices of Tempest and Ava not far ahead. Rydia signalled ...

I agree that starting with your character as an adult would work best but it might be interesting to have a prologue of when the character was a child, just ...

Alicia "Beautiful scenery, huh? Shame about the company." Alicia grinned as she sat down beside Jude and then rolled her eyes in the direction of the many girls and boys ...

Awesome, Nate! I'm really loving the new layout =)

Storybooks will now be moved to the storybook archives after three months of inactivity as opposed to the previous standard of six months. As before, if you would like to ...

All Users Will Need 2 Pass A Grammar Test - I'm very sorry to inform you of this Nate but I'm afraid that you've failed the YWS grammar test and ...

That's okay, I think the usage of magic will be increasing pretty soon. I've not got time to post just yet but if anyone does before me, it would be ...

Alainna - I think that may have been an error because I've written a critique, saved it as a draft and posted it later but still received the maximum points. ...