Rydia

Who wants to donate me all their points? For a good cause of course. Taking out Nate that is ;)

No chance! Pshhhh. I so deserve to be first and Nate knows it XD

Na-ate stop cheating! And if you're going to pull that old prank at least put someone interesting at the top, how about me for example ;)

lit-chick: That's great =). In your next post, try to make your way towards the castle though and meet up with aurora, your character's mentor. Then Tempest and Rydia will ...

Banned for being older than me.

Okay, now where to start? The others have covered grammer pretty well and I feel like I can't do anything other than give you a few general observations because this, ...

Just wait until my exams are over and I'm once again a free person ;)

Kestrel "Well yes but..." Kai hesitated and Audra pushed him towards the window and soon everyone was piling through and chasing after Ichidan. "How are we going to catch him ...

Raven Ten minutes into the journey when everyone was settling in, Raven, Iuki and Warren made their way to the front of the ship, wrapped in their warm cloacks and ...

Rydia "Get ready to leave," Rydia said briskly, "Ava has kindly offered to take you to her dwelling where you will spend the night. Tempest and I are going to ...

Banned for no longer being a Twit.

We haven't discussed that part actually but I think the mentor person will need to be Aurora since we haven't met up with her yet, if that's okay with Kalli? ...

Living in Mercer Island until our adulthood, Arabella, Liam, Alex and I often discussed what had made us come together. [I'd suggest 'what brought us together' rather than 'what had ...

Oooh, I much prefered this chapter to the other one, it's great. You've got some really solid humour, not too over the top but not so subtle and complex that ...

The enemies fired their guns relentlessly as everyone huddled behind an outcropping of rocks for cover. Caboose was behind another rock a few yards away. [This is a little awkward. ...