Rydia

Alainna is always friendly but she's equally serious so no worries there. Hello! We met briefly in your blog but I thought I'd add my two cents here as well ...

I need more requests! Come on people, there's a begging permit here with your name on! I'm pretty hopeless at finding random pieces for me to critique these days and ...

That's awesome, thanks for the tip Nate!

There must be more to life than this: a winter wind and withered kiss upon these frozen, sun-parched lips; just orange peel and apple pips. We're living on remains of ...

Raven "Who was that?" Raven asked, kissing Luke and wrapping her arms around him as he sat back on the bed. She pulled him down towards her, tangling her slender ...

Sounds interesting, let me see... about time I had another male character I think. Name= Daniel Redding Age= 29 Gender= Male Appearance= Daniel is tall with tanned skin, short, chestnut ...

Kestrel Kes held the teddy lion gently by the paw as she watched the flickering auras of her friends. "This shouldn't change our plans," Kestrel said. "You three take it ...

This sounds interesting. And an interesting plot needs an interesting character =) I'm going to edit the bio format a little to make some things clear: Real Name= Tom Kyrvoshki ...

I'll be going away pretty soon too but I shall look after your character during your first week of absence and then I'm sure the others can take care of ...

Kestrel "If he'll have me," Kes replied. "I'll take all the training I can get!" Stella laughed lightly as she led the way down to Kai's room. "Very determined, aren't ...

Alyssa I don't like the look of the blood on that cloth. There's quite a lot and it could be one of several life-threatening diseases. Quite equally it could be ...

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Just a brief note on chapter five: This was a good chapter and one of my favourites so far but at the same time, I had trouble remembering which characters ...

A few minor suggestions: It threw deep oranges, bright reds into the sky, which became streaked with colour. [This could be a beautiful, descritive sentence if you thought about it ...