Rydia

I'm liking this extra inch =)

Defence for certain! I'd kill any Brit who spelled it differently.

Sure, I can post now and I should have time for one or two more posts before I go to Greece as long as I don't get hijacked by my ...

Sorry, I decided to give myself a brief rest from typing yesterday because my arm was aching after giving blood. But I'm not so bad now. Just don't expect anything ...

An apple pip is those little brown pips that you find in the core of apples. They're sort of like seeds and I love threading them into my poetry because ...

That's some great advice, Colly! Thank you, I'll see if I can make some of those lines a little stronger. I think I've got some real solid ideas on how ...

Tom "Not scared of nothing!" The lurker answered in a muffled voice. "But I have my own ways of getting around." The buses rustled again and the soft tread of ...

Sorry Griff, I completely forgot about the strengths and weaknesses. I'll add them here. Strengths: Read afore written 'abilities' section as strengths. Weaknesses: Daniel is very reluctant to kill in

Buggs: Thank you! It's so nice to be getting so much encouragement, I'm glad you liked it =) Sapphire: That's okay, compliments are great too and even just that little ...

Okay time for the overall comments (I suggest that you read this, then read the nit-pick attached and then come back to this. In fact, I’ll copy this to the ...

*Moved to the Lounge* The art and photography section is for member's original art work. This would fit better in the lounge.

Sylver: Oooh, I like that. Thank you =) Tom Tom opened his eyes slowly, scared of what he might see. What if they'd changed the configuration settings and plunged him ...

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it =)

Thanks for the critiques all! It's lovely to have so many responses already =) White Velvet: There's eight syllables for each line but I know what you mean about it ...

That's okay =) I read your 'About the Author' too and if your writing's at all similar, you have a beautifully fluid and intriguing style of narration. And you're a ...