Rydia

Banned for creating characters with the most annoying names ever. You know which ones!

Warren All of a sudden, the temperature in the cavern soared and the rocky ground began to shift and shudder as a huge creature pulled itself out of the wall. ...

Kestrel Kes shrugged the backpack from her shoulders and opened it up, pulling Kon out quickly. "Hey, hey, watch the tail!" Kon complained, "And if it's all the same by ...

Banned for playing with squirrels! And for not being quick enough in chat ;)

Okay, I'm going to make this the cut off point. I've certainly got time to do the remaining two critiques posted above but any posted after this message will probably ...

Dawn with Fox. [This is a strange way to phrase your title. It makes me think Dawn is a person at first and I suppose that will be proved right ...

Alyssa For a moment, I consider doing the right thing. I consider doing what in the mysterious man's opinion would be the right thing but I have different principles and ...

So far we have: Butterfly: 0 Polka: 4 (Yoyo, Mattster, Fand, Andy) Green flowers: 1 (Moon) Aqua flowers: 3 (Pingu, Me, Fand) Blue Flowers: 2 (Mattster, Andy) And yes, you ...

Daniel "What do you ladies say? I'm sure searching for something," Daniel announced with a grin, speaking to his table but loud enough that his voice carried through the room. ...

Tom As soon as the red haired girl stepped back, Tom pulled the string taut. "What are you doing?" Her dark eyes flashed angrily but there was a cautiousness to ...

Tom Tom was laughing after having guessed another song correctly, though he'd had a fair few wrong and not even attempted guessing others. He fell silent as Ayric began the ...

Tom Tom lay on the bed with his back to the room and wondered if he should tell them everything he knew. It wasn't like it was much, just a ...

I'm not the best at writing or critiquing songs but I'll see what I can do... You Knew [Not the most interesting of titles but as far as song titles ...

I've found this site that allows you to create custom pens that look really good and I'm thinking of getting one made for Jennafina and then sending it to her ...

Now I can see why Dreamer pointed me in your direction. You've not had the best of reviews... but anyway, welcome to the site. If you need a helping hand ...