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Re: Shadow Reapers
Kestrel "Oh good because I want to be able to help this time," Kestrel said as she followed Urahara to the training room. She carried her clenched fists heavily by ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: "C" words
Cauldron, Cupboard, Candle, Chalice, Chalk, Copper, Clasp, Core, Curriculum, Cathedral... But yeah, Via has the best suggestion. A dictionary is your friend!
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: VG Rumble
Raven "Shall we?" Warren prompted, approaching the nearest of the staircases that wound its way up to the platform. Luke nodded his agreement and together they all set off, ascending ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Army Wives
Nichola "So how is Robert?" Adrienne asked seriously, turning her head slightly to watch Emma who had begun to toddle towards the television. "He's better," Nicki sighed. "Then why so ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Columbia Mercy Hospital
Good to see this started, love. What's the rules on multiple characters then? I can be perfectly content with one for now but I wouldn't mind another later on. Name: ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Army Wives
Nichola "Hello?" Nichola wandered back towards her husband's chair, pressing the phone against her ear. Absently she slipped her feet out of the white sandals and curled up against Robert, ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Loki
Go ahead Stella! I can always play your character until your return.
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Loki
This could be complex or it could be simple though as of yet I am unsure which it will be and I'm hoping that you will all help me. Reyu ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Arcadia Online: Logon
My first suggestion links in with that of the user above me: don't use Arcadia as a name for your game. It sounds really cool but it's just been used ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Poison Love
Hey there, sorry for the delay! Okay so my first impression of this is that it's short but then that's rather obvious and prologues are often short. The trouble is ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Would you pay to remove ads?
I voted yes. Admittedly only to the $2 a month option but I chose that thinking more about the majority of the site than just myself: it's easier to persuade ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Metal Gear Solid 5: Revenge of the Patriots (Prologue)
Sorry about the delay! Here's a few specific comments to start with: Otacon’s white lab cloak rustled in the light breeze, [I'd suggest a full stop here because I think ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Crossbar Ranch
Alicia Alicia mounted Megan and trotted her to the edge of the disorganised camp where Jude was waiting upon Tux, looking a little wary but also slightly excited. Megan smiled ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Lost Paradise
Tom "Some friends," the boy scoffed and Tom smiled just a little but was silently berating himself for trying to make his voice sound masculine. It really didn't have the ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Sam!
Happy Birthday, Sam! I hope you have a great day xx
Jul 21, 2008
