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Re: Hellloooo!!!
Hey there Brenda, it's lovely to meet you. And welcome to YWS! Feel free to tell us a little more about yourself here. What are you interested in outside of ...
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Re: Columbia Mercy Hospital
Roxanne Peters. Her fingers trembled as she held the phone close against her ear, trying to calm her breathing, trying not to look at Evan who looked terrified, his face ...
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Re: Crossbar Ranch
Alicia Slowly, Alicia tugged a neatly folded piece of pink, scented paper out of her pocket and passed it to Jude. "What's this?" he asked, unfolding it and staring at ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: Army Wives
Nichola A snearing, five year old girl entered the room, followed closely by a huddle of prissy, smartly dressed children and a plain looking, dark haired woman with rich, chocolate ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: Dangerous Temptations 2
Marissa stared at the man in front of her. At 29, he hadn't changed much, except for the broad shoulders and the tighter, flatter stomach. The muscles of his chest ...
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: Dialogue Questions
The general rule is you use a small letter after dialogue, no matter what. But some people (including some published authors) use capitals after periods and question marks.
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: Dangerous Temptations
Hey there! Looks like I’ve found time sooner than I expected =) Sorry this has taken so long, dear, but without further ado, here it is: Midnight Horror Island August ...
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: If someone on YWS died...
Oh, good point, Via. I didn't think about facebook. Yes, I suppose people would be able to contact my sister etc.
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: Fortuitous Graves
Hello my dear! A critique, just for you: The title: I love it. Your word choice is perfect. It's intriguing, it's pivotal to the poem and already there's a gorgeous ...
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: Columbia Mercy Hospital DT
Daniel is now with Evan and Roxy with the police, outside the door.
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: If someone on YWS died...
I've thought about this before too. And I'm not the sort of person to leave without saying goodbye so if I'm ever gone for a month or more, I'm probably ...
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: A Different Kind of Storybook
Samuel Andrews - October 14th, 2008 - 3:55 pm - Venice, Italy - Hotel As the doors opened, the flood of golden light that descended upon Isabella and Sam was ...
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: Columbia Mercy Hospital
Daniel (And Roxanne.) "Fine." Dan watched wearily as Jeremy helped Rebecca to move down the hallway and then looked thoughtfully at the piece of paper in his hand. The list ...
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: VG Rumble
Warren The fortress loomed before them and Warren took a hesitant step forward, his mind awash with memories. He led his friends towards the large, black iron gate and was ...
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Hey everyone! My list is nearing empty again and I was wondering if anyone has a sequence of chapters they'd like me to look at? Something to keep me busy ...
Aug 12, 2008
