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Raven "What did you do?" Warren demanded, looking at Luke with his eyes wide, a glitch of hope glimmering in their darkness. "He healed them," Raven gasped, recognising the effects. ...

Could I be any more brainless? All these strange [Comma here.] sharper senses… and for what? I don’t know how to use them correctly, and I still blunder on as ...

The hallway disappeared from around her. [This is a little awkward. Maybe 'The hallway disappeared around her' or 'The hallway around her disintegrated.'] The searing scent of burning flesh crawled ...

Canlyniad Jorge frowned. ‘But it’s ugly. It’s strange.’ ‘Yes.’ The watch captain jingled my lead about in his hand. [I think you should introduce this chapter with a little description ...

- I just made mine =)

Hehe. I so just donated half a point to Snoink XD But I think it might have given her a full point instead. You could make it a game, dear. ...

I've just donated you 1 point, to help you on your way. Haha! Let's all donate Snoink 1 point XD

I see myself working in a small time law firm, probably getting by reasonably okay and still writing in my spare time. I don't think I'll have anything published but ...

You know, this almost makes me want to earn points just so that you don't get that featured member spot. But unfortunately I love the storybooks section too much.

“Dude, that party was awesome!” Michael said for the third time that night, his speech slurred by a few too many beers at a local kegger. He stumbled along the ...

No, that's good. I was saying to Via just the other day that we needed a way to bring your character in more. And besides, it means I get to ...

Daniel "AB negative," Daniel said, standing in the doorway, leaning against the frame and watching in stillness. His heart was thudding steadily, as if he didn't have the energy to ...

Samuel Andrews It was with great interest that Sam listened to the squabbling and accusing of the various detectives, jotting words down in his unreadable hand. However, he did grimace ...

Roxanne Peters "I want a way out, front door, no one stops me," the woman demanded. Roxanne half nodded and then scowled as one of the officers shook his head, ...

Less Hope, More Faith Lest hope corrupt your foolish heart, quick cast her out and let depart the acrid whims of angel's wings which clutch at twisted puppet strings. Take ...